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Brand Story Framework: The Structure That Holds Up

Dave Morgan - Co-Founder / Operations & Project ManagementDavid Morgan19 August 20269 min read
Dave Morgan speaking on a panel at a Talk Event in Cardiff.

Most published brand story frameworks are the same framework with the labels changed.

Somebody reads StoryBrand, keeps the shape, renames the parts, and puts it out as a methodology. You can spot it because the customer is always the hero and the brand is always the guide. It is a good idea and it has been photocopied so many times the edges have gone soft.

I am not going to add another one. What follows is the structure my studio actually uses, taken out of the documents we hand to clients, including the parts that do not work.

It is not a narrative arc

The first thing worth saying is that this is not a story in the once-upon-a-time sense. It has no hero, no villain and no journey.

It is a compression hierarchy. A long, precise argument gets squeezed into one short thought, and that thought then opens back out into the handful of things you say and the way you say them. Four layers, each one derived from the one above it.

The four layers of a brand story: argument, idea, pillars, voice.

The argument. Who you are for, what you do, and why anyone should pick you. Long, specific, evergreen.

The idea. That whole argument compressed into a single thought a person can carry in their head.

The pillars. The three things you say, in order, each with the evidence sitting underneath it.

The voice. How those three things sound when a human being says them out loud.

We call it distillation, because that is what it does, and because the word was already in our own documents before anyone thought to name the thing.

The order is not decorative. Each layer is built from the one above, which means you cannot skip a rung. Most of the mess I see in SME branding is a business that has written a strapline before it has written the argument, then spent two years defending a line nobody can explain.

Layer one: the argument

This is positioning, and it is the layer people most want to hurry through.

We build it against a formula. It is not ours. Versions of it have been in circulation since the eighties and every strategist has a variant, which is exactly why it is worth using: it has been tested by more people than any of us could test it with.

For [who] who want [what], [brand] is the [category] that [difference]. Unlike [the alternatives], it [does this], and can prove it.

The formula is a discipline rather than a piece of copy. Nobody publishes the finished sentence on a homepage. It exists so that a founder, a salesperson and a new starter all describe the business the same way when a customer asks.

Two parts of it do most of the work, and both are uncomfortable.

The first is "unlike the alternatives". You have to name who you are being compared with, honestly, and say what you offer that they do not. When we ran this for Christie Residential, the brief we were given was to smarten up the logo and tidy the livery. Reasonable, and it is where most of these conversations begin. What came out of the positioning work was that every estate agency in the area said roughly the same things, so a sharper badge would have made them a better-looking version of everyone else. Brychan, their MD, described what we did instead as getting "into the DNA". The output was a brand bible and a messaging overhaul, not a neater mark.

The second is "and can prove it". If you cannot evidence the claim, it is an aspiration, and aspirations are the reason so much brand messaging sounds identical.

Layer two: the idea

The argument is too long to carry around. The idea is the version that fits in one person's head.

There is a test we use, and it is unglamorous. Write the thought on a whiteboard. If the room nods, it is the idea. If someone asks what it means, it is a slogan and you are back to layer one.

This is the layer that decides whether a brand survives contact with the people who have to use it. The designer laying out a brochure, the salesperson answering a question, the account manager writing a caption at four on a Friday: none of them will read the positioning document. All of them can hold one sentence.

For Clarified, the idea came out of a discovery questionnaire rather than a workshop. Gareth had written that the project was partly about being honest about who he was, and injecting himself into the business more. That sentence decided everything after it, including the recommendation that his existing logo had to go, and the reason we gave was not an aesthetic one. His branding showed nothing about him, and the business was him.

Layer three: the pillars

Three things you say, in the same order, every time. This is the layer most frameworks include and almost none of them finish, because they stop at the claim.

A pillar without proof underneath it is a wish. We write the evidence into the document beside every one, and if we cannot find any, the pillar comes out. That rule has killed more good-sounding pillars than any client ever has.

Haydale make advanced materials using patented graphene functionalisation, and what they had been saying about themselves was that they bring together innovative technology and engineering expertise to unlock graphene using patented functionalisation technology. Every word is true and an investor cannot follow any of it. The pillar that survived was that they make everyday things stronger and longer-lasting. The proof underneath was the science, in order, in an animation somebody could actually watch.

Three is not a magic number, but it is close to the limit of what a team will repeat consistently. Five pillars is a document. Three is a habit.

Layer four: the voice

Most tone-of-voice sections are a list of adjectives, and adjectives are where this work goes to die.

The fix is mechanical. Take each trait and convert it into a rule someone can follow while writing. "Grounded" becomes short sentences and everyday words, nothing a customer would not say in a pub. "Confident" becomes make the claim, then show the evidence in the same breath, so we never reach for a superlative. A trait you cannot turn into an instruction is decoration, and it should come out.

Smoke & Slaw are a barbecue business that comes to you. There was no origin film. The whole brand lives in the voice: the way the menu reads, the way the site talks, the way an enquiry gets answered. Steve reported that customers started talking about the ads and that sales markedly increased. That is the voice layer doing commercial work, with nothing above it visible to the customer at all.

What changes in the business

The reason to do this is not that the brand gets tidier.

Sales conversations get shorter, because you stop explaining what you do and start working out whether there is a fit. Proposals get easier, because the argument was made before you opened the document. You turn work down earlier, which reads as lost revenue on a spreadsheet and is recovered margin in practice, since the badly fitting jobs are the ones that overrun. And the website more or less writes itself, because layer three already decided what the first three sections say.

Aqualogic had twenty years of water conservation work behind them and their Chief Growth Officer described the business as operating "in silence". Not a capability problem. The business was being explained in fragments, by service, by division, by whoever happened to be in the room. Narrowing what gets said, and in what order, is commercial infrastructure rather than decoration.

Where this framework does not work

Every framework article ends with the framework winning. Here are the three places ours does not.

The layers do not get rebuilt at the same rate. When a business repositions, the argument and the pillars get properly rethought, because they are what changed. The values and the personality get carried forward, because nobody is looking at them. I have handed over a strategy where the top of the document described the new business and the bottom still described the old one. When positioning moves, the lower layers are the first thing to re-examine, not the last.

Personality descriptors converge. We compared four of our own strategy documents across eighteen months. Three of them landed on "quietly confident". A private investigations firm, a five-hundred-year-old school and a solo events consultant, all reaching for the same phrase. Personality feels specific while producing adjectives that would fit almost anyone. The voice layer survives the same test only because it forces every trait into a rule.

It assumes the business already exists. This is the big one, and it is the reason a lot of people reading this should not use this framework yet.

You cannot compress an argument out of a business that has not decided what it sells, who it serves or what it charges. Positioning presupposes a position. Where that is the case, the useful work is a different set of questions: what the offer is, what the packages are, what the day rate needs to be to make the year work, and what kind of client gets a fast no. Positioning comes after those answers, not before them. Run it first and you produce a beautifully articulated position for a business that does not yet exist.

If you are pre-offer or mid-pivot, the top layer is not positioning. It is deciding what the business is.

Where to start

Write the argument first, badly, and out loud. Say who you are for, what you do, who you are being compared with and what you can prove. It will be too long and that is correct, because the writing is the last hour of the job and the argument is the rest of it.

If you want to see what the finished article looks like from the outside, the ten brand storytelling examples are all businesses whose four layers agree with each other.

If the argument is the part you cannot chair yourself, that is what our Brand Strategy Workshop is for. Half a day to a full day with your leadership team, depending on the size of the team and how much ground there is to cover, in our studio or at your place. You leave with the argument written down, the idea agreed, and three pillars with evidence under each. It suits businesses turning over roughly £500k to £15m who have outgrown the way they describe themselves. Book a discovery call and we will tell you honestly whether you are ready for it, or whether you have an offer problem to sort out first.

Written by

David Morgan, Co-Founder / Operations & Project Management

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